Chapter 2 - Part 2, Page 13

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TheVoidchildProject
30th Nov 2016, 2:54 PM

Time to grow up in today's Voidchild!

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Delta-v
30th Nov 2016, 10:37 PM

Awww, so idyllic, so heartwarming, so normal.....

Wait, is that a metaphorical falling shoe I see there on the horizon?

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TheVoidchildProject
1st Dec 2016, 12:27 PM

Nope, nuh-huh, never. Everything is always perfect forever now! ;)

Without spoiling, I think I can admit that we've reached a turning point where things are maybe as good as they're going to get for this little family.

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khkddn
1st Dec 2016, 2:22 AM

I like how her hairstyle changes so much as she grows up, gives a real sense of time passing.

and why are those panels getting darker and smaller is something bad going to happen oh no D:

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TheVoidchildProject
1st Dec 2016, 12:30 PM

It was one of the few ways I feel I could convey the passing of time with my current ability. I actually considered not having the captions but kept them in because I felt it might've been difficult for the reader to tell her progressing she in these panels without them. :P

As for the darkening panels, don't worry. It's just a transition style into the next scene. Nothing bass gonna happen today or any day going forward. Nope, nothing, nada... ;)

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NeilKapit
1st Dec 2016, 4:48 AM

She seemed happiest when her hair was shortest, so using that one panel as the entirety of my case, I propose that Mary keep her hair short to solve all of her problems.

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TheVoidchildProject
1st Dec 2016, 12:32 PM

Maybe she took this advice to heart considering the short hair she has at her current age? Or maybe the solution isn't the length of the hair, but the flowers? An in-depth investigation is needed!

(I also miss Wyrecats)

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ranger_brianna_new
3rd Dec 2016, 3:37 PM

I love the growth of our little Snowflake into the Mary we know she became shown.

The only thing we've yet to see is the loss of her innocence, and darn it, I know it's gonna happen but I don't want it to! >:I

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TheVoidchildProject
3rd Dec 2016, 9:42 PM

Haha, thank you. To hear that you feel so involved in Mary's fate is the ultimate compliment from a reader. I realise it's kind of a slow build with a lot of focus on fleshing out characters, dialogue and setup. I'll say without spoiling that we are moving ever closer to drastic changes. As for what they are and how they come about, I won't spoil! But I do spy something on the horizon! ;)

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RED2015
22nd Feb 2017, 6:23 PM

She grew up Happy! That's so beautiful!

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TheVoidchildProject
22nd Feb 2017, 9:47 PM

Mary does consider these years of her life to be some of her best. Hopefully it lasts a while longer. ;)

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