Chapter 1 - Part 2, Page 15
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RED2015
19th Jan 2017, 2:14 PM

It's a straight up beat down!

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TheVoidchildProject
19th Jan 2017, 6:33 PM

Indeed, Mary isn't really a fighter either. Though she's doing her best. ^_^

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AugustaCaesar
27th Feb 2017, 7:35 PM

"HNGH!" is some awesome onomatopoeia you have going on there! :)

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TheVoidchildProject
28th Feb 2017, 4:32 PM

Sound effects and exclamations is something I always find a challenge. I rarely use them and find that the reader can often fill in the blanks themselves if I can get the art to speak for itself. But sometimes, a good "ouf" can add a lot! ^_^

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