Chapter 2 - Part 1, Page 4
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TheVoidchildProject
3rd Aug 2016, 6:39 PM
Back when before I ever decided to have title pages, this was supposed to be where the title card for Chapter 2 - Part 1 went.
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khkddn
4th Aug 2016, 3:56 AM
I can see why this could have been a title card, the placement of lights and darks lead the eye around. Looks like outer space?
TheVoidchildProject
4th Aug 2016, 9:32 AM
I think imma have to go back and adjust the brightness on this page though. I'm looking at it now on my
iPhone and it's much too dark for me compared to when I drew it on my computer. Lesson learned!
Miaubol
17th Jan 2019, 11:41 PM
This feels like "can't be good" o.O
..why can't dark and light be friends? ;)
TheVoidchildProject
18th Jan 2019, 7:37 AM
Oh this old page... I still Think it's probably a bit "too dark" to make out what's going on. But I find things I'd wanna fix with every page I go back to look at noawadays. And I'm not doing that. better to move forward!
Miaubol
21st Jan 2019, 6:18 PM
Considering what I've read by now, I think the darkness fits just perfectly.
On fixing old pages- Yes, I agree. Better move on than getting stuck in an endless editing loop. The only exception is when I realize something is (unintentionally) confusing or unclear.
TheVoidchildProject
22nd Jan 2019, 7:28 AM
Yes, I agree about going back to fix old pages. I'm not really keen on doing so myself, but if I felt like there's stuff like that that might compromise readability or something, I'll go back and fix it. =)