Chapter 2 - Part 2, Page 6

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TheVoidchildProject
6th Nov 2016, 2:35 PM

Unnecessary apologies in today's Voidchild!

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khkddn
6th Nov 2016, 4:59 PM

Something in my eye...it's the power of friendship :'(

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TheVoidchildProject
6th Nov 2016, 9:32 PM

Albeit a repressed male friendship where the act of crying must be blamed on dirt in your eye. ^_^

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NeilKapit
7th Nov 2016, 12:58 AM

Huh, so that's Mary's mother? I got the impression that Imad and Raheem were a couple and Mary's two dads. I should've known better than to make assumptions, but it doesn't change the quality of the story any

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TheVoidchildProject
7th Nov 2016, 10:34 AM

Raheem is Mary's adoptive father. Imad is a childhood friend of Raheem's and Alile (featured in this scene) is Imad's wife with whom he has two children. I actually didn't think that Raheem and Imad might've been interpreted as a couple and now I almost wish I'd thought of that back when I wrote the script! :D in any case, it's my job as the author to make these things clear to the reader so it's not on you if you interpreted it differently. It might be a cleared up a bit in the following pages after which you should know everything necessary about Raheem before the story moves on to the next stage. ^_^

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ranger_brianna_new
8th Nov 2016, 10:32 AM

I also had the first thought of that, then I realized, "No, that doesn't make sense with what we know" and was able to figure it out, for what it's worth.

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TheVoidchildProject
8th Nov 2016, 6:48 PM

Well it's not super evident. Maybe I'll draw up a family tree at some point. ^_^

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