Chapter 2 - Part 3, Page 10

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TheVoidchildProject
19th Feb 2017, 2:50 PM

Sudden stillness in today's Voidchild.

Ratings, comments, views and share are all always welcome and come with a hefty does of gratitude from this humble author! ^_^

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Haegan2005
19th Feb 2017, 5:46 PM

I would be in shock too!

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TheVoidchildProject
19th Feb 2017, 8:38 PM

Me three! Let's hope things remain this calm for the rest of the night. ;)

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mr.Trouble
19th Feb 2017, 6:31 PM

WHY DIDN'T SHE KILL THEMMMMMMM

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Delta-v
19th Feb 2017, 8:22 PM

She may have. It all depends on whether they can breathe vacuum or not.....

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TheVoidchildProject
19th Feb 2017, 8:40 PM

This is a very good question! And it may just so happen that this chapter will touch on the subject of life and death and Mary's outlook on this before the day is over. ;)

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mr.Trouble
19th Feb 2017, 10:52 PM

well i'll kill them for her *pulls out butter knife*

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TheVoidchildProject
20th Feb 2017, 7:45 AM

Oh no! A butter knife! =O

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Delta-v
19th Feb 2017, 8:26 PM

So The Void has a far shore?

Who knew.....

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TheVoidchildProject
19th Feb 2017, 8:39 PM

lol, well they're not inside The Void (that probably looks very different). But it would be nice if it did have a far shore. But lots of stuff did disappear. And this will be addressed sorta in the next page. ^_^

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khkddn
20th Feb 2017, 1:27 AM

Oh good the bicycle didn't get sucked up into the void. Extra points for detailed background continuity, lol

Where did Mary go, is what I'm wondering now D:

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TheVoidchildProject
20th Feb 2017, 7:46 AM

I felt bad for the owner of the bike, so I returned it. ^_^ he never asked for all this.

We'll find out where Mary went very soon. Don't you worry! ;)

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NeilKapit
20th Feb 2017, 2:46 AM

Great job on the wreckage. Looks like a very unique landscape, probably because we're far more used to seeing big cities destroyed than small villages.

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TheVoidchildProject
20th Feb 2017, 7:48 AM

The challenge there was for me to decide where to cut off the wreckage in the distance because, as you point out, Kynthale is not a big town. I trust the reader to piece together what's necessary though. ^_^

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