Chapter 2 - Part 3, Page 19

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TheVoidchildProject
22nd Mar 2017, 4:46 PM

The inevitable tragedy.

As always, and this is worth re-iterating, all of you who read Voidchild... are the best!

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trad118
22nd Mar 2017, 4:58 PM

OH JESUS

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TheVoidchildProject
22nd Mar 2017, 5:07 PM

Far from it I'm afraid... Though the exclamation is well appreciated by my author self. =)

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khkddn
22nd Mar 2017, 4:59 PM

[tragic self-hatred inducing backstory unlocked!] noooooo

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TheVoidchildProject
22nd Mar 2017, 5:08 PM

We'll see if that's where it goes. But those happy days are now, regardless, definitely over.

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mr.Trouble
22nd Mar 2017, 5:21 PM

W H Y

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TheVoidchildProject
22nd Mar 2017, 5:24 PM

Haha, maybe it's that thing you've said once before in a comment? That I'm a monster. ;)

(I love your comments)

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mr.Trouble
22nd Mar 2017, 6:31 PM

you're a soulless monster ;~;

..i freak out in the comments a bit too often, don't i XD

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TheVoidchildProject
22nd Mar 2017, 6:49 PM

And I love it! ^_^

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TheMario360
22nd Mar 2017, 11:36 PM

"That's life", or in this case, death.

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TheVoidchildProject
23rd Mar 2017, 10:23 AM

Definetly, there's a certain schism to his final words, isn't there?

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jamie59
23rd Mar 2017, 1:00 AM

Nothing like upping her nightmare material way UP.

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TheVoidchildProject
23rd Mar 2017, 10:24 AM

Yes, definetly. Let's just hope the author doesn't linger on the tragedy to try and emphasise the nightmare. ;)

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NeilKapit
23rd Mar 2017, 3:17 AM

I hate being right, and the death of Mary's father by her own (accidental) hand makes me so right it hurts. :'(

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TheVoidchildProject
23rd Mar 2017, 10:27 AM

Attentive reading is what probably made you see this coming. I've been telegraphing and (trying) to hint at this since the start of the series. But you are definitely right in that you are witnessing a major turning point in Mary's life and her character. I want it to come across as not too binary though, but that's what the next chapter is for. Where we will close the book on this origin chapter.

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Miaubol
18th Jan 2019, 12:26 AM

...

D:


so.. he wasn't dead.. but now he is... because she though the was dead and her revenge got him killed D:

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TheVoidchildProject
18th Jan 2019, 7:48 AM

That's right, against her father's wishes, she let that very human side of her get the better of her. He wouldn't scold her for it though, not in those final moments...

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