Chapter 3 - Part 1, Page 12
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TheVoidchildProject
1st Oct 2017, 1:39 PM
Movian's flaunting and taunting brought to a halt in today's Voidchild!
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bizarremoon
1st Oct 2017, 2:01 PM
I always love crime investigations :) I also love the angles and close ups you use in each panel. Makes the scene really powerful
TheVoidchildProject
1st Oct 2017, 2:15 PM
Thanks! To be honest, the crime drama stuff really isn't my strongest suite. But I'm hoping it comes off okay.
And for talky scenes I really try to mix it up with the perspectives and I'm glad that's noticable too. ^_^
30_Bouncyballs
1st Oct 2017, 5:58 PM
Oooooh, damn son! You just got diddly-done-told!!!!!
Take that, you creepy weirdo!
Loving the angles, by he way!
TheVoidchildProject
1st Oct 2017, 8:38 PM
Hah, he done got interpreted, analyzed and seen through! ^_^
And thanks for the compliment on the angles. Talky scenes are really difficult to mix it up with. =D
TheVoidchildProject
1st Oct 2017, 8:36 PM
Which is precisely Abe's observation too! You two are like peas-in-a-pod-in-Victoria! ^_^
ranger_brianna_new
31st Jan 2018, 11:15 PM
I also had that thought.
Way back when the original death happened, it was heavily implied that the death was his doing, but this page makes it pretty unambiguous given his personality that he was NOT in fact responsible.
TheVoidchildProject
1st Feb 2018, 7:46 AM
Hi Brianna, long time no see. I hope you're doing well? =)
And yes, looking at Movian's expressions is the thing both of you along with Abe are doing here. You all seem to have him pegged the right way. ;)
NeilKapit
1st Oct 2017, 10:07 PM
Love the "acting" here, through body language, expressions, and "camera" angles. Both guys are able to keep their cool and resist spilling their secrets.
TheVoidchildProject
2nd Oct 2017, 8:44 AM
Thanks! They are both very much acting! Though, at the moment, one of them broke character (if only slightly). :o For which were learning that there may be an x-factor in play. Stay tuned!
TheVoidchildProject
2nd Oct 2017, 8:46 AM
Glad you picked up on this! I wasn't sure if I was too subtle or not subtle enough with that aspect, but it's the most relevant part of the page.
Leading to the question of what went down in the police station when Catherine was killed. Oh jeez! =o
TheVoidchildProject
2nd Oct 2017, 8:59 AM
I love the way you're interpreting Movian and Abraham here. You pinpointed a couple of relevant points/character traits here. An underlying frustration in Movian at Abraham's reveal, his "ownership" of the issue and a possible shift in priorities for Movian. Both in regards to Abraham as a "nuisance" but also that there's an x-factor in play in, as you so wonderfully put it, his private garden!
Comments and observations like this makes me so happy because it indicates to me that the plot and characters are reading as intended. Feedback of this kind, as well as constructive criticism, is crucial.
Of course the art goes hand-in-hand (lols) with that. And I'm just as delighted to hear from readers about my improvements. The biggest foe of mine when it comes to hands is laziness. Because posing and drawing hands is almost as much work and thought as posing the entire rest of the base body (sans expressions). But we do a lot of non-verbal communication with our hands so I try (don't always succeed) I'm not succumbing to my own laziness.
In short: Thank you for the lovely comment! ^_^