Chapter 3 - Part 2, Page 20

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TheVoidchildProject
11th Feb 2018, 2:14 PM

With only two pages left of the issue, what more can Amir do to stretch Mary's patience? Stay tuned to find out.

Also, Public Author Announcement, the last two pages are going to be late. As soon as I'm done with them, they'll be up! Hope not to keep you hanging for too long!

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Haegan2005
11th Feb 2018, 3:45 PM

I think he just did. Assuming she lost a friend. Or what his speech may lead her to believe. Someone may not leave this place alive.

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TheVoidchildProject
11th Feb 2018, 8:16 PM

Yes quite a weird place for the author to leave thigns hanging, what with that "friend"-comment... You are very accurately, predicting an escalation though. It would be downright rude of me not to do something for the end of the issue. ;)

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Haegan2005
11th Feb 2018, 11:59 PM

OH!

Two people holding their arms straight out and slapping each other?

Or maybe something bigger? Could be something bigger, but that would not be nearly as funny!

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TheVoidchildProject
12th Feb 2018, 9:44 AM

Hah! No slapping I'm afraid (I'd love to see some art of the two them having a fight like that though XD)!

I'll just say it's (hopefully) going to feel impactful. ^_^

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khkddn
11th Feb 2018, 5:22 PM

"I wonder if they taste as good as they look" looking back, this isn't the first time he's said something about her eyes, but this comment is a lot more... cannibalistic...

It looks like Amir is about to be interrupted in that last speech bubble... I wonder what it will be...

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TheVoidchildProject
11th Feb 2018, 8:18 PM

Hah, no need to read too much into his cannibalistic comment. Amir's just gross and weird about stuff. Either unwittingly or very consciously. I'll leave that for readers to decide. ^_^

And yes, there's maaay be some relevance to Amir's final words on this page. You'll know why when I get those last two pages out the door. ^_^

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Sovember
11th Feb 2018, 6:42 PM

Alas! The real Amir for all to see.. And it's gloriously evil D: At least he has some great poses on this page xD

I wonder how Mary's gonna react. Amir's just escalating the provocation to new heights this time around!

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TheVoidchildProject
11th Feb 2018, 8:20 PM

Well, I'm not a big fan of black and white (except in comic art ofc!). But Amir sure is doing a good job of just looking downright evil right now... He's either pushing buttons on purpose or getting to into the spirit of things.

Without saying too much, Mary will react in, uhm, ways before the issue is done. I hope to get those pages out sooner rather than later so I can show you instead of subtly trying to hint about it. =D

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snuffysam
11th Feb 2018, 9:32 PM

Licking eyeballs isn't sexy, Amir. Get some help.

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TheVoidchildProject
12th Feb 2018, 9:54 AM

Amir is both gross, kind of a jerk and potentially very dangerous. Question is if he understands this and is doing all this consciously to troll or manipulate or just reacting.

The take-away is that that's a pretty gross things to allude to either way...

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Delta-v
12th Feb 2018, 2:36 PM

I'm more interested to see what Mary does to stretch Amir--physically. ^^

You're really going all out on the expressions and body language, here. You're putting so much effort into this that it's not surprising that the last two pages will be delayed a bit. I'm looking forward to seeing what you'll come up with. :)

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TheVoidchildProject
12th Feb 2018, 5:03 PM

Hah! If Amir's into fierceness, he might like you. ;)

Something I've noticed along with how my art is developing is that pages take longer now. But the delay is only partly related to that. I'm not going to stress about making them though, it's more important to me that they come out right than rushed. ^_^

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Delta-v
15th Feb 2018, 2:31 PM

Well, yeah, your pages have much richer detail now. :)

An artist friend of mine told me that he improved in stages. First, he would improve a technique, and second, he would increase his speed in doing so as he became more familiar with it. You're right on track. :)

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TheVoidchildProject
18th Feb 2018, 12:10 PM

Also, I'm more picky about details than I used to be. =D I think your artist friend is right on the money, I'm a the point where I've got some things down and others not. But even with some things that I know how to draw, I need to master the speed element of it.

But also, to not get too caught up in the technical side of drawing and let the emotive aspects take priority. It's better, in my mind, to draw something that emotes well than is technically correct in every facet. ^_^

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Amaze Comics Ent
5th Mar 2018, 4:14 AM

Shit
I smell the big reveal in his words.
Hell Mary's gon kill him

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TheVoidchildProject
5th Mar 2018, 1:15 PM

Again, you've got a good nose. By now you'll have flipped the page to see what he's revealed. And it'll have consequences.

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