Chapter 3 - Part 3, Page 17

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TheVoidchildProject
6th Jun 2018, 12:40 PM

Oh, I guess that is gonna be a problem...

Heads-up that there may be more delays in updates before the chapter is done. I'll work hard to avoid it if I can, but my RL-job is taking up a lot of time at the moment.

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EDIT: This page's dialogue has been edited after it was originally posted because The Author wasn't totally happy with the copy.

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khkddn
6th Jun 2018, 4:32 PM

The chase is on...! Whether Mary likes it or not :(

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TheVoidchildProject
7th Jun 2018, 6:28 AM

Since meeting Amir, it's been a rollercoaster of things she doesn't like. So why stop now? =x

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Sovember
6th Jun 2018, 5:23 PM

Dang so Mary is gonna get pinned for all this huh? Hopefully she escapes ! Woner if Mary is gonna have to learn how to portal to be good at this game of tag :O

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TheVoidchildProject
7th Jun 2018, 6:31 AM

Who knows, maybe she's lucky and it'll be someone she knows. ;) She's not been very lucky so far. As for portaling, I'm sure it wouldn't hurt. But the chase might not be settled by practical ability, but something else. ;)

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InfectedBlood
7th Jun 2018, 1:49 AM

Not gonna tell her? Such an asshole!!! So we're left wondering more and more along with Mary :/

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TheVoidchildProject
7th Jun 2018, 6:32 AM

Sorry about that! Amir's trolling, aside from being his style, also serves a purpose story-wise. Coming right up!

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Delta-v
7th Jun 2018, 7:09 PM

Well, Abraham is on his way, so perhaps he can sort things out for her--or simply declare priority in apprehending her, and spirit her away. :)

It's truly amazing how irritating Amir is, even when he isn't there!. O.o

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TheVoidchildProject
8th Jun 2018, 8:02 AM

Lol, I thought I told you to stop reading my scripts? ;) Though you are safe to assume Mary has at least that one ally in all this.

Being an annoying jerk is something Amir seems to have perfected into an art form. And while it may not, or should necessarily, serve to create any sympathy on his part... I will say that here is a powerful and very human driving force behind his actions. Misguided as they may be.

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snuffysam
7th Jun 2018, 9:50 PM

So "about to get crowded" refers to the PIU showing up, presumably. As for figuring out the secret... perhaps Movian has done some research?

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TheVoidchildProject
8th Jun 2018, 8:05 AM

Yeah, we can gleam the police boat in one of the small panels, coming up in the small isle. It’s safe to assume they’ve come with the PIU in tow.

As for Movian, he may rear his head once more before the chapter is to let us know what he’s been up to. ;)

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Miaubol
10th May 2019, 9:49 PM

"I'm not gonna"-
Yes, why should he tell? ;D

Actually, can we buy into anything he says? Sure there's some truth to it, but it may be pretty twisted, warped into what he wants to be true (?)

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TheVoidchildProject
13th May 2019, 4:05 PM

I wouldn't trust him as far as I can throw him. One second he says it's unavoidable and then he suddenly does an about face and says it isn't. Strange that... ;)

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Miaubol
17th May 2019, 12:14 AM

the perfect way to bait her.

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