Chapter 4 - Part 1, Page 13

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TheVoidchildProject
27th May 2020, 6:02 PM

Mary makes a "splasch" at the crime scene while Abe and "Dick" continue to argue over jurisdiction!

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BitterBadger
27th May 2020, 8:20 PM

Talk about contaminating a crime scene! lol

Almost had the same feeling imagining what the rest of that corpse looks like. Effective camera position ;-)

Bet the stench didn't help either!

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TheVoidchildProject
27th May 2020, 9:24 PM

Yes, Mary is going through her whole contamination register here! Her debut as part of the PIU might not be going how either she or Abe imagined.

Wonder what “Dick” will think of all this. ;)

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snuffysam
27th May 2020, 9:10 PM

I think Abe and Mary are learning some valuable lessons about preparedness today...

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TheVoidchildProject
27th May 2020, 9:24 PM

Yes, always bring wipes. And your license to practice paranormal arts I guess...

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Sovember
27th May 2020, 9:49 PM

Hahaha best first day on the job ever?? XD

Only up from here :) . I'm curious to see if Mary will become more or less sensitive to this kind of scene! (She has seen some wild stuff but this must provoke something visceral D:)

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TheVoidchildProject
28th May 2020, 7:28 AM

Haha, and her first day is only just beginning mind you. Plenty in store for Mary's first outing as a member of the PIU!

Your point about Mary's reaction to this kind of gruesomeness is very poignant too. It does serve a purpose for the story though, I promise that much! ^_^

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NeilKapit
28th May 2020, 6:37 AM

He could look her in the eye when he shakes her hand. What a....

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TheVoidchildProject
28th May 2020, 7:29 AM

Deacon wasn't given the nickname "Dick" for no reason it seems. =D

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Miaubol
29th May 2020, 11:03 AM

whoever did that, appears they've been creative, not just splat and go o.O

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TheVoidchildProject
29th May 2020, 8:08 PM

I don’t know, that windsor knot looks pretty sloppy to me! :D

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Delta-v
29th May 2020, 3:36 PM

"You never get a second chance to make a good first impression." --Will Rogers.

After that, all that's left is trying to make up for it. ^^

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TheVoidchildProject
29th May 2020, 8:09 PM

Haha, very true. Mary’s starting out in an uphill battle here. Let’s see if she can make a better second impression in the next page!

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